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First Page Feedback – Changing the Narrative

Here’s one from a Kimani Romance! Office romances are always popular. Thanks, @QuinniePoo! Kayla sat in the huge chair behind […]

Posted on: September 3, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Pentakagon

There’s something mysterious straight from the title! And we know plenty of people who love their coffee in the office… […]

Posted on: September 2, 2014
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First Page Feedback – It’s a Love Thing

More Special Edition entries! @LeeKilraine has some good ideas in her opening… It was the binky’s fault. If Gabriella had […]

Posted on: August 29, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Dark Souls

A few Nocturnes came in as well! This evocative opening is from @ImogeneNix…   The burning at the back of […]

Posted on: August 28, 2014
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First Page Feedback – The Viking’s Promise

The number of Historical entries is making our editors happy! Here’s Charlotte’s opening… “There’s nothing else to be done.” The […]

Posted on: August 27, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Untaming Delilah

Ooh, a Nocturne! Thanks Ashlynn! (@Ashlynn_Monroe), for sharing… “Hey there Delilah, what’s it like in New York City…” sang Jonathan […]

Posted on: August 26, 2014
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Inside a Harlequin Copy Editor’s Life!

Authors–and editors–have frequently mentioned the blessing of a good copy editor to make sure those last participles are undangled and infinitives […]

Posted on: August 26, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Secrets in the Stacks

JMH sent this in for Romantic Suspense. We do love librarian heroines–and maybe a hero, too? Or someone else? Chapter […]

Posted on: August 25, 2014
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First Page Feedback – A Measure of Money

Another Special Edition entry! Luckily readers also love these stories… Jenny stowed her bag in the overhead locker of the […]

Posted on: August 22, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Potential Wife

One of our first Harlequin Romance entries I believe! Troy Charles slumped in his chair with one long leg draped […]

Posted on: August 21, 2014