There comes a moment in a romance novel when the world stops and nothing else matters – the first kiss, a long look, or a deep and certain feeling that they’ve met someone truly special. Authors can build up these moments using the situation, anticipation, chemistry, backstory and lots of emotions flooding the page.
We asked Harlequin authors to tell us about the first kiss or first spark of emotional connection between the characters in their new release, and how they pulled readers into this ultra romantic moment.
Playing the Sicilian’s Game of Revenge by Lorraine Hall
“The first kiss happens early in this story as the hero, Teo LaRosa, is caught between his revenge plans and his unquenchable desire for Saverina Parisi. She doesn’t know she’s been wooed for revenge. By utilizing the hero’s point of view, I added tension and emotion to the kiss as Teo’s internal thoughts battle out between what he has planned…and what he desires.” – Lorraine Hall
Writing tip! Play with different points of view to amp up emotion and conflict.
The Bodyguard’s Deadly Mission by Lisa Dodson
“Andrew comes to see if Alexa is okay after a second near-death mishap during her tactical driving training session. She attempts to downplay the incident, but Andrew can tell she’s shaken and hugs her. His concern and touch open a floodgate of pent-up desire for them. Wiping her tears away, his fingers linger on her cheek. At that moment, the need to connect with her is too great, and Andrew leans down and kisses Alexa.” –Lisa Dodson
Writing tip! Add sensory details – the protective hug, the lingering fingers, the intense pull toward the kiss – to immerse readers in the romantic moment.
Texas Law: Lethal Encounter by Jennifer D. Bokal
“The beginning of emotional intimacy for Ryan and Kathryn happens when he cares for her—she’s been stabbed—instead of going after the bad guy. Kathryn’s been carrying a huge burden since her husband’s death and now, Ryan is someone she can count on in a crisis. Ryan has had a troubled past and been overlooked by many because of it. But when Kathryn thanks him for caring for her, he begins to see his worth.” –Jennifer Bokal
Writing tip! Use a moment of vulnerability to forge a special connection between your characters.
An Innocent’s Deal with the Devil by Tara Pammi
“The heroine Yana and hero Nasir have a contentious relationship. Nasir begins to see that Yana’s persona as a destructive, reckless party girl is an illusion she’s created to protect herself. When Nasir is sincere with her and tells her that, Yana’s armor falls away and she realizes there’s so much freedom in being seen as her true self, flaws and fears and all. The moment is more than a hot kiss and giving in to attraction. For the first time, both Nasir and Yana are letting themselves be who they really are. It’s intoxicating and freeing.” –Tara Pammi
Writing tip! Vulnerability shows up again in this example. This time the author uses emotional vulnerability and honesty to change her characters so they can be together.
Your turn now! Check out our fun first-kiss writing challenge and more tips from romance editors and authors to bliss out your readers:
The First Kiss – A Writing Challenge
Back to Basics: Creating Emotional Intimacy in Steamy Scenes
