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First Page Feedback – A Shot At Forever

A Single Title Contemporary–so HQN!–from @AvaQuinnWrites. This heroine has some interesting rules…   Rules. Sheridan Ward lived her life by […]

Posted on: September 30, 2014
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First Page Feedback – The Keys of the Music Box Witch

Ooh, time travel can be great–and oh, so tricky… @ARCook_writes has a wonderful imagination… Chapter One: Gunslinger The last one […]

Posted on: September 26, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Desperate

First person is unusual in our series titles, but has worked. However, it doesn’t let the reader get insight into […]

Posted on: September 25, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Without a Doubt

Sandra P has a Harlequin Special Edition opening! If Mason Gray were to summon up a favorite female fantasy his […]

Posted on: September 24, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Flying Doctor’s Revenge

And another Medical! Charlotte balances the emotion and drama in an appealing way. Dr Ethan … tossed the newspaper in […]

Posted on: September 23, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Somerset Cove

And we’re back to doing our own First Page Feedbacks after an exciting week of SO YOU THINK YOU CAN […]

Posted on: September 22, 2014
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It’s Just a Big Misunderstanding…

By Laurie Johnson, Assistant Editor, Harlequin Medical Romance Avoiding the pitfalls of contrivance, coincidence and misunderstandings in a story usually […]

Posted on: September 16, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Soul Tender

Sophia has sent in a Historical opening set in the 1920s–very intriguing!  Chicago-1926 Thyra Edward’s paused outside of the Pullman […]

Posted on: September 12, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Heart Talk

Another Medical title! T.D. Jones (@TDJones5) has creating a great story! “I won’t work with him again!” Samantha Summers insisted […]

Posted on: September 11, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Green Coat, Black Gloves, Red Handbag

A fascinating title–or shopping list?  Terry Barca (@terrybarca1) has some great visual images to capture readers in this romantic suspense […]

Posted on: September 10, 2014