Author Challenge! Page One Critique: Results

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Results of our First Page Challenge are in!

Our team of editors randomly selected five of your first pages – and one bonus first page! Here are their critiques! We enjoyed reading these openings and hope you’ll keep going on your writing journeys. If you entry wasn’t critiqued here (we are only so many editors), stay tuned for next month’s boot camp and other opportunities in September. Thank you for submitting all your fabulous first pages!

Page One_Untitled by Tricia Sargant

Page One_Until Summer Ends by Liz Isaacson

Page One_Untitled by E Mellyberry

Page One_Untitled by Emily Evans

Page One_ SpyMistress by Fiona Marsden

And one more:

Page One_His Rebel’s Heart by April Arrington






14 replies on “Author Challenge! Page One Critique: Results”

Great first pages! I can’t wait to read the rest of chapter for these stories–hope to see these entries come September. I’m especially looking forward to reading the chapters written by April and Liz. 😀

Well done to the ‘exhibition’ panellists. I particularly liked ‘Until Summer Ends’ and ‘His Rebel’s Heart.’ Loving the various critiques too.

Wow, these are all so very different but all really compelling and original. Hope we get to read them in September. Good luck!

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