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First Page Feedback – Dark Justice

Here’s a potential dystopian, potential  futuristic story from Shelley Russell Nolan.  1 Jackson opened his eyes a fraction to study […]

Posted on: August 15, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Smouldering Embers

Jackie Burrows sent in a Presents submission for today’s First Page Feedback!   He was late. He was never late. […]

Posted on: August 14, 2014
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Harlequin Editor Carly Silver Goes Over the Finishing Touches to a Book

Sometimes a year goes by slowly–and sometimes very fast! Amy Woods, debut author for Harlequin Special Edition and Carly Silver, […]

Posted on: August 14, 2014
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First Page Feedback – In A Pirate’s Debt

Here’s another piece of feedback for a Love Inspired  Historical. In a Pirate’s Debt is by Elva Cobb Martin! (@elvacobbmartin) […]

Posted on: August 6, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Turn to Me

Here’s a Kiss/Presents entry from NLH–it’s definitely catchy! 🙂 Katherine Holt hated these things. After a performance, all she wanted […]

Posted on: August 5, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Aquila

We’re going to have the occasional two posts a day as I’ve gotten some good responses from editors! Here’s a […]

Posted on: August 4, 2014
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First Page Feedback – House of Tears

Here’s a suitably atmospheric Shivers entry from @MaggiAndersen! England, 1920 The wind built to a crescendo, and with a moan, […]

Posted on: August 4, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Murder Most Unusual

Ooh, a great title and compelling opening! 🙂 Thanks, Michelle Somers (@msomerswriter), for an exciting start to the day! They […]

Posted on: August 1, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Leaving Louisiana

Alison sent this in without a genre chosen–it’s a moody, intriguing opening for sure. Either YA or New Adult perhaps…. […]

Posted on: July 31, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Aflame

This if for Harlequin E Historical Romance. SJ Cameron opens the story with definite action!  A moan. He paused on […]

Posted on: July 29, 2014